The Pied Piper of Stars

Hey, I just finished reading your story and wow. Honestly, it was so vivid, like the whole thing was playing out in my head while I read. I’m an artist, and I usually take on commissions for Webtoons, Comics, Manga, Character Art, and Cover Art. And honestly, your story has that spark to look absolutely stunning as a comic or webtoon 👀. I’d be really excited to bring it to life visually (no pressure, of course, but I couldn’t resist trying). If you’d like to take a look at my work, or chat more about the idea, feel free to reach out on Discord (eve_verse) Looking forward to hear your tho

This is fantastic work and I’d be happy to share some ideas if you’re open to hearing them. Discord: elsa_lopez12 Email: elsalopez3935@gmail.com

Wow! Amazing story. Absolutely worth the read ❤️

What an engaging story! I particularly enjoyed the relatability of the characters. I think it was this connection that made the ending feel so especially tragic. This is a story that will stay with you long after you’ve finished reading.

I loved this original take on Pied Piper. Seeing the events unfold through Alma's eyes grounded the sci-fi elements into a believable setting. The growing sense of unease was paced perfectly, and the ending is a gut punch (in the best possible way.)