Jennifer James
4 weeks ago
This story is honestly so amazing. I’m seriously hooked. You’ve created such a cool and detailed world, it feels so real, like I can see everything in my head. You're honestly so talented, every scene just pulls me in.
The way you introduced Dr. Starling was super interesting. His job as the Director of Technological Innovation already sounded cool, but then that detail about the glass thing in his finger. That was such a smart twist! It made me so curious about what’s coming next. You even made the technical stuff sound exciting and easy to understand that’s not easy to do, but you did it.