End of the Beginning

End of the Beginning

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Batman117
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Batman117

4books
12followers

A single soldier from the Primordial Republic is tasked with escorting the Chalmayan Princess back to the Primordial Home World of Primia in a single heavy assault ship while also evading other forces...

Chapters

1Chapter 1: Orders
2Chapter 2: Slip-space
3Chapter 3: Refuel
4Chapter 4: Cloaked
5Chapter 5: Health

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evelyn queen
evelyn queen
3 weeks ago
Hello! I just finished reading your story and wow, it was really amazing. The world you built is so cinematic, I could practically see the visuals in my mind. I’m a professional artist/illustrator, and I take commissions on comics, webtoons, manga and manhwa. I’d love the chance to bring some of those scenes to life visually. If it’s something you’d like to explore, I’d be excited to discuss it with you. No pressure at all, but I just think it could be amazing. Feel free to add me on Discord ( eve_verse ) if you’d like to discuss more or take a look at my work. Regards, evelyn.
Jacqueline Parson
Jacqueline Parson
4 months ago
Hello I read your story and I really liked it. You have written a very good story. I really liked the setting of the story, and i have many specific ideas for your next story. Feel free to message me on Discord, jacquelineparson
kIMBERLY.BYRNE
kIMBERLY.BYRNE
4 months ago
Just wanted to say, story is amazing! The way you build the storyline with such rich concepts and flow is truly inspiring. I’d love to collaborate by creating custom art or concept illustrations to give your work a more professional and eye-catching look with in fair price. If you’re curious, you can check out my portfolio here: https://www.artstation.com/kimberlybyrne6 you’ll also find my socials linked there. Looking forward to hearing from you! 😊
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karencrab
5 months ago
Hello, I read your story and I really liked it. If you don’t mind, I’d love to share some ideas that might make your story even better. Would it be possible for us to talk on another platform? Email: karencrabtree697@gmail.com Discord: karencrabtree.
Jack Davis
Jack Davis
5 months ago
Hello I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, and I must say it played out in my mind like a vivid film rather than just words on a page. The imagery was so natural and immersive, it felt destined to be more than just text it deserves to be seen. I’m a professional comic and manga illustrator, and I specialize in translating stories into compelling visual experiences whether that's full-length illustrated editions or eye-catching covers built for both print and digital platforms. If you ever decide to visually expand your story, I’d love to collaborate in shaping its artistic ide

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