Premonitions

Thank you so much! I definitely got the idea partially from our world, how we named our planets (except for Earth) after Roman gods. And I’m glad that I portrayed Natalie’s slow fall into darkness very well. As for a sequel…well, it’s definitely in progress, I’ll say that much. :)

Finally finished. I really like the idea of naming planets after Greek gods. You do a good job portraying Natalie's slow fall into darkness. If you ever wanted to do a sequel and develop this world further, I'd definitely read it.