TRACKER II: FIRST MISSION

TRACKER II: FIRST MISSION

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Carolyn Varvel
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Carolyn Varvel

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Seven years of peace between the Tomajian Empire and the Unified Alliance of Planets have enriched both the Empire and the UAP. Lady Ev D’Ander returned to her home on Senett between concerts a...

Chapters

1Characters and Chapter 1
2Chapter 2
3Chapter 3
4Chapter 4
5Chapter 5

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karencrab
karencrab
1 month ago
Hi, I thoroughly enjoyed your story when I read it. I would love to offer some suggestions that could improve your narrative even further, if that is okay with you. Is it feasible for us to communicate via a different platform? Email address: karencrabtree98@gmail.com. Discord: karencrabtree_
Amelia432
Amelia432
1 month ago
Hey, your storytelling really caught my attention. I’m an artist, and I see a lot of potential in your upcoming story for stunning visuals and creative expansion. I’d love to collaborate with you and share some concepts that could make your story even more powerful and immersive. here is my discord ava_9764
Ruby M. Ballamy
Ruby M. Ballamy
1 month ago
Hello Carolyn, I truly enjoyed reading your story it was engaging and left a lasting impression on me. I would be delighted to share a few thoughtful suggestions that could help strengthen the narrative even further, if you’re open to receiving feedback. Would you be comfortable connecting through another platform for easier communication? If so, you can reach me directly at rubymballamy@gmail.com. Looking forward to your response, Ruby M. Ballamy
Alexandraa Barrera
Alexandraa Barrera
1 month ago
I truly enjoyed reading this! I’ve got a couple of suggestions in mind if you’re interested Discord: alexandraa_barrera3 Insta: alexandraa_barrera2
Robert D. Shore
Robert D. Shore
3 months ago
Hi! I just read your story and your story is TRACKER II: FIRST MISSION and i absolutely loved it. The way you structured the plot, conveyed the message, and selected such a meaningful topic was truly impressive. Your writing style really stood out to me—it felt thoughtful and inspiring. After reading it, I felt encouraged to discuss a few creative ideas with you. I'd love to hear your thoughts!

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