The Deceived

The Deceived

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AlyxTheGemini
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AlyxTheGemini

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A group of strangers finds solace in the embrace of finding one another. Convinced by their leader to make the move to the heart of the desolate wilds, But beneath the veneer of unity and the promise ...

Chapters

1Prologue
2A Friendly Presence
3The Beginning of a New Life
4Adaline
5 A New Enlightened Path

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Ruby M. Ballamy
Ruby M. Ballamy
3 days ago
Hello, I truly enjoyed reading your story it was engaging and left a lasting impression on me. I would be delighted to share a few thoughtful suggestions that could help strengthen the narrative even further, if you’re open to receiving feedback. Would you be comfortable connecting through another platform for easier communication? If so, you can reach me directly at rubymballamy@gmail.com. Looking forward to your response, Ruby M. Ballamy
Mattie Gidley
Mattie Gidley
5 days ago
Hi there! I hope today is going well for you. After reading your story through to the end, I must say that it really caught my attention. It has such a distinct charm, is imaginative, and is exquisitely written. It was really inspiring to me as an artist! Whether it's the scenes, the characters, or any other small element that makes it come to life, I would really love to talk more about it. Together, I think we might come up with some incredible, imaginative ideas. I would be delighted to connect with you if that sounds good. My Discord: mattiegidle3 My email: mattiegidley@gmail.com
Mattie Gidley
Mattie Gidley
5 days ago
Hi there! I hope today is going well for you. After reading your story through to the end, I must say that it really caught my attention. It has such a distinct charm, is imaginative, and is exquisitely written. It was really inspiring to me as an artist! Whether it's the scenes, the characters, or any other small element that makes it come to life, I would really love to talk more about it. Together, I think we might come up with some incredible, imaginative ideas. I would be delighted to connect with you if that sounds good. My Discord: mattiegidle3 My email: mattiegidley@gmail.com
Alexandraa Barrera
Alexandraa Barrera
1 week ago
Your writing is so engaging! I’d be happy to share some ideas if you’d like Discord: alexandraa_barrera3 Insta: alexandraa_barrera2
Donna Spencer
Donna Spencer
1 week ago
I’m still floating in the world you created what a beautiful, soul-stirring journey. Your storytelling is so vivid and immersive that it set my imagination ablaze with visions I’d love to bring to life on canvas. Each scene and character feels alive, carrying emotions and depth that would translate powerfully into illustration. I’d be delighted to create artwork inspired by your characters and the universe you’ve shaped, capturing its spirit through color, texture, and detail. If the idea of visual collaboration excites you, I’d love to connect and explore the possibilities together. DISCORD:

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