Hope(less): Judgement of the Six, Book 1

This story had me hooked from the first line! The way you described the character’s ability to sense people like blips on a radar was so cool and different I’ve never read anything like that before. The whole scene in the park felt so mysterious, I could literally picture the darkness and those glowing lights around people. And when the green halo appeared around that one man? I was like, okayyy something big is about to happen. You're amazing at building suspense in such a simple but powerful way. I’m so curious about who that man is and what’s really going on.

hello , i just wrapped your story its was too interesting , your creativity and talent is amazing ! im truly impressed by you .. i have some certain ideas related to your work , and thinking about the physical character of your story , if you are interested then please let me know ..