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Hey! I just wanted to drop by and say that your story was an incredible read. The way you build emotion and tension feels almost cinematic, like a storyboard that’s already ready to be drawn. It was easy to picture, which says a lot about your writing skill. I’m a professional comic/webtoon artist, and I couldn’t help but imagine how well your story would work in that format. It’s rare to find something that feels so naturally suited for visual storytelling. If you'd like to see some of my work or if you’d like to see what your story could look like as a comic, you can reach me on Discord

This was such a page turner and I’ve got a few ideas I’d be happy to share if you’re open to feedback Discord: alexandraa_barrera3 Instagram : alexandraa_barrera2

This is fantastic work and I’d be happy to share some ideas if you’re open to hearing them. Discord: elsa_lopez12 Email: elsalopez3935@gmail.com

What a great story! I was hooked from the beginning. You drop readers into an immersive, gritty, almost medieval sort of world--but the tech the Theurgists have is a brilliant contrast, and very unique. Well done, Dan!

Hi Daniel, Just finished reading through this entry and I like your style! Great way of integrating the inspiration image into your story line. I think the UFO, tyrannical looking castle with the searchlight, and the bridge made good choices ( I feel like those were your choices!). I think the AI were a twist and a good one at that, the situation definitely seemed hopeless in the earlier stages. Great work!