Separated by Destiny, Bound by Blood: Brothers Divided in an Alien War.
In the Castle Convota, lived two brothers, Timmy and Spud, their hearts brimming with aspirations that stretched far beyond the...
Your words carry emotion in such a peaceful way. It’s simple but unforgettable
Ruby M. Ballamy
1 month ago
Hello Brian
I truly enjoyed reading your story it was engaging and left a lasting impression on me. I would be delighted to share a few thoughtful suggestions that could help strengthen the narrative even further, if you’re open to receiving feedback.
Would you be comfortable connecting through another platform for easier communication? If so, you can reach me directly at rubymballamy@gmail.com.
Looking forward to your response,
Ruby M. Ballamy
Alexandraa Barrera
1 month ago
This was such a page turner and I’ve got a few ideas I’d be happy to share if you’re open to feedback
Discord: alexandraa_barrera3
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karencrab
2 months ago
Hello, I read your story and I really liked it. If you don’t mind, I’d love to share some ideas that might make your story even better. Would it be possible for us to talk on another platform?
Email: karencrabtree697@gmail.com
Discord: karencrabtree.
Donna Spencer
2 months ago
I recently had a pleasure of reading your story and that was incredible experience, I have few ideas related to your story would youl like to know?
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email: donnaspencer175@gmail.com