The City of Stars and the Orb of Celestial Essence

The City of Stars and the Orb of Celestial Essence

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Layla Soreyne
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Layla Soreyne

2books
18followers

In the ancient city of Elurinda, where towers shimmer like distant stars and every step hums with quiet power, the people believe their destiny is written in the heavens. For generations, they’ve stud...

Chapters

1Chapter 1: The Storyteller
2Chapter 2: The Luminous City
3Chapter 3: Starlight in the Chamber of Stars
4Chapter 4: The Bridge Is Open
5Chapter 5: Proof of Power

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EvelynWilliams_
1 month ago
Hey, I just finished reading your story and honestly, wow! The way you built the world and the characters had my imagination running wild the whole time. It really felt like I could see the scenes play out like a movie. I’m an artist who takes commissions for Webtoons, comics and manga. While reading your story, I couldn’t help but imagine how amazing it would look as a comic or webtoon. Your writing already has that cinematic energy that would translate perfectly into panels. No pressure at all, but if you’d ever be interested in commissioning someone to bring your story to life visually,
Tammy Shaw 21
Tammy Shaw 21
5 months ago
Hello~! I hope you’re doing well. Actually, I’m new to this platform, and I saw your story here. I really liked it. Its pattern is very good. Can we talk about this story? I’ve also been in this field for quite some time, and I hope you’ll like my ideas. Dis;tammyshaw907
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Elsa Lopez
5 months ago
I enjoyed this so much! I’d love to offer a few thoughts that might help elevate it even more Discord: elsa_lopez12 Email: elsalopez3935@gmail.com
Mary__Holliday202
Mary__Holliday202
5 months ago
Heyya~! Hope you are doing well. Actually, I read your story and your chapters. I swear your ideas very brilliant and amazing. I liked it Btw, can we chat on Discord? Dis: maryholliday
Aubrielle Isla
Aubrielle Isla
5 months ago
keep writing.

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