Three bloodlines. One body. One soul without a nation.
An—a girl carrying the blood of France, China, and Vietnam—lives not only amidst the clashes of culture, history, and politics,
but also torn apa...
Hello Quy,
I truly enjoyed reading your story it was engaging and left a lasting impression on me. I would be delighted to share a few thoughtful suggestions that could help strengthen the narrative even further, if you’re open to receiving feedback.
Would you be comfortable connecting through another platform for easier communication? If so, you can reach me directly at rubymballamy@gmail.com
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Looking forward to your response,
Ruby M. Ballamy
Alexandraa Barrera
1 week ago
This was such a page turner and I’ve got a few ideas I’d be happy to share if you’re open to feedback
Discord: alexandraa_barrera3
Instagram : alexandraa_barrera2
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Elsa Lopez
1 week ago
Your story really hooked me and I’d love to share a few ideas I think could make it even stronger.
Discord: elsa_lopez12
email: elsalopez3935@gmail.com
karencrab
2 weeks ago
Hi, I thoroughly enjoyed your story when I read it. I would love to offer some suggestions that could improve your narrative even further, if that is okay with you. Is it feasible for us to communicate via a different platform?
Email address: karencrabtree98@gmail.com
Discord: karencrabtree_
Mary__Holliday202
2 weeks ago
Hello!
I hope you’re doing well. I read your story and I really liked it. Your story is also inspiring, and I hope you’ll definitely write more stories like this. Your story is very good. Can we talk about it on Discord? It might be better for both of us, maybe you’ll get more ideas, because I also have a lot of ideas for this kind of story.
Discord: maryholliday