MANDALA

MANDALA

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Edward Eidolon
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Edward Eidolon

1books
11followers

An odd team of assassins hunts their target across the urban sprawl of everyday America. But is this world real, or something more? Join an unlikely group of friends as they deal out death across rea...

Chapters

1Prologue
2The Office Job | Chapter 1: The Gun
3The Office Job | Chapter 2: The Diner
4The Office Job | Chapter 3: The Target
5The Office Job | Chapter 4: Death Threats

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evelyn queen
evelyn queen
3 weeks ago
Hey dude, I just read your story and WOW, my brain legit went into full cinema mode while reading, like I could literally see the scenes playing out lol. I’m actually an artist, and I usually do commissions for Webtoons, Comics, Manga, Character Art and Cover Art. And honestly? Your story as a comic or webtoon would be NEXT LEVEL! I’d be super hyped to bring it to life visually (no pressure at all, just thought it would be super dope). If you’re even a little curious or wanna check out my art, hit me up on Discord (eve_verse). Can’t wait to hear what you think abt the idea! Regards, evelyn.
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Miriam Smithh
2 months ago
Hi Author, I’m a casual reader and I really love reading stories. Today, while I was reading, I came across one of your stories and I absolutely loved it. The way you write truly sets you apart from others. I especially liked how beautifully you described each scene it felt so real and vivid I was just wondering, how long have you been doing this amazing work?
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Elaris Skye
3 months ago
Incredible writing, cinematic, visceral, and hauntingly poetic. Every line bleeds tension and tragedy, like a slow-motion fall through fire and memory.
Alexandraa Barrera
Alexandraa Barrera
4 months ago
I truly enjoyed reading this! I’ve got a couple of suggestions in mind if you’re interested Discord: alexandraa_barrera3 Insta: alexandraa_barrera2
Ruby M. Ballamy
Ruby M. Ballamy
4 months ago
Hello Edward, I truly enjoyed reading your story it was engaging and left a lasting impression on me. I would be delighted to share a few thoughtful suggestions that could help strengthen the narrative even further, if you’re open to receiving feedback. Would you be comfortable connecting through another platform for easier communication? If so, you can reach me directly at rubymballamy@gmail.com . Looking forward to your response, Ruby M. Ballamy

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