The Sixth Axis

The Sixth Axis

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Niloc
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Niloc

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A young man named Niloc wakes up one day in a strange foggy land. There he meets a god-like being named only simply as "He" or "Him." There he slowly loses himself and sees out the eyes of another bod...

Chapters

1Chapter 0 - Niloc
2Chapter 1 - Aaron
3Chapter 2 - Valek

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Ruby M. Ballamy
Ruby M. Ballamy
3 days ago
Hello, I truly enjoyed reading your story it was engaging and left a lasting impression on me. I would be delighted to share a few thoughtful suggestions that could help strengthen the narrative even further, if you’re open to receiving feedback. Would you be comfortable connecting through another platform for easier communication? If so, you can reach me directly at rubymballamy@gmail.com. Looking forward to your response, Ruby M. Ballamy
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Elsa Lopez
1 week ago
Your story really hooked me and I’d love to share a few ideas I think could make it even stronger. Discord: elsa_lopez12 email: elsalopez3935@gmail.com
karencrab
karencrab
1 week ago
Hello, I read your story and I really liked it. If you don’t mind, I’d love to share some ideas that might make your story even better. Would it be possible for us to talk on another platform? Email: karencrabtree697@gmail.com Discord: karencrabtree.
Mary__Holliday202
Mary__Holliday202
2 weeks ago
Hello! I hope you’re doing well. I read your story and I really liked it. Your story is also inspiring, and I hope you’ll definitely write more stories like this. Your story is very good. Can we talk about it on Discord? It might be better for both of us, maybe you’ll get more ideas, because I also have a lot of ideas for this kind of story. Discord: maryholliday
Jacqueline Parson
Jacqueline Parson
2 weeks ago
Hello your so fantastic

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